For my reflection I will be using my Literary Analysis on the story "The Sniper." For my reflection I will be choosing two traits of good writing to focus on when re-evaluating my paper. The two that I have chosen are sentence fluency and word choice. Based on the comments I received from my peers and teachers, I feel that my choices will appropriately suit my paper's reflection.
The reason I chose these two elements is because after reviewing my comments and reading over my paper I felt that these were my weakest areas. Just in my first over-glance since submitting my paper I noticed things that needed to be revised that fell into thee two categories. Overall I thought I had a good paper, yet I see places were I could have inserted more couple wording and worded my sentences better. All in all I am actually a little bit excited to revise my paper again and hope everything turns out well.
Will, sentence fluency is definitely something to look at. However, your rubric shows one of your highest scores in word choice. Based on the comments on that paper, I would strongly consider focusing on organization, making sure that your paper stays focused on your argument rather than telling the story with commentary.
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