Friday, August 24, 2012


     If I were to argue one thing I would argue the freedom that my parents give me. My parents keep me on a tight leash and I don't like it. They don't allow me to go out to the movies with friends, spend my own money, and take care of my own problems. My argument states that I should be trusted to go out on my own as long as I have my phone. If I have my phone i could call them and tell them that I'm ok at any time they want and be safe. They are also worried about crime, but I'm a very, very aware and vigilant person and i know when theres a bad situation and when to remove my self. My mom doesn't trust me with money, but I've proved my argument to her and now that has changed I will still argue my point of freedom until she gets it.

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  2. Will, this should include a relevant title, and remember that all your posts should be two developed paragraphs in length. This is the beginning of a strong argument, but needs further development.

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    1. Also, please include your reading times on your reading post. See "Routines" for examples.

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